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Emptyness... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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EMPTYNESS.... I have an emptyness inside me I have an emptyness outside I have an emptyness around me I have an emptyness in my life Where will the feeling take me When will the feeling end What will my life become As I contemplate the next bend Can you guide me towards the light Can you guide me towards a friend Can you guide me pure and simple Can you make my emptyness end.... Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
only your heart can,,, use it wisely... and you shall have all!!! enjoyed your write... A voice of honesty |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i want to be empty......... of pain, of angst, of tormentation of love yes, i want to be empty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad write, a longing for fullness i can relate to every day |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
QjQ: thank you for your comments I will remember your tip! Inkedgoddess: thank you I will have good thoughts for you that your pain, anguish and torments leave you quickly. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Let your heart guide you to do the right thing...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Your words have such an impact my friend. I send you sunshine and a smile, in the hope they help you find comfort. Take care! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That empty place has a way of being filled at the most unexpected times and in the most unexpected ways....hang on, and be prepared to HANG ON! I like the way you use repetition to build dramatic tension -- a nice technique that's hard to do right. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The repetition works well here.. Be well..be safe..be happy. ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When I have experienced moments like that in my life, I just kept on saying over and over --like a mantra, "...and this too shall pass!" I swear that it has helped me. Now, when difficult times are upon me, I just plow through the dark tunnels to the light at the end of them. You were so effective at portraying feelings of emptiness, that I want to go give you a warm, loving hug and say, "Roniece, sweetheart,...and this too shall pass." Loving hugs, EA |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I think you do need some hugs....   Ethel |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Exquisite Roniece......  |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
emptyness, a common link between us all, I often think and I myself, oft fill this void at the same time, I fill my drink  Jason |
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TasteOfOctober Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 94 |
I as well can relate. Emptyness i think, is definetly on my top ten list of things most despised. its feelings like that that drive me to fight and to find the flames. The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are. |
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