Driving me Home on Saturday Night

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Open Poetry #27

Driving me Home on Saturday Night

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-29 04:48 AM

This time,
I don't know why..
I drive, further,
hover above the wind.
It crosses,
my eye
shivers.

You watch me
from my lungs.
And I dressed you
in his clothes.
I can't even breathe,
and taste this
style..

I keep driving no
matter the miles I put
on the tires that you had
aquired at
clearance price the night
before we decided to
drive far away..
In a fast car my
hands pull you but my mind
won't take..

Another step,
I decide
that I don't like big words because
they threaten my small ones.
Unable to coexsist..
Like it's so cold,
but my lungs are driving fire.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-29 04:50 AM

good write n read,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

2 posted 2003-06-30 01:27 AM

"I decide
that I don't like big words because
they threaten my small ones."

I like this thougt. Thanks for sharing.

quatro

timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-06-30 01:28 AM

Exquisite write Kaoru as always!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-30 01:47 AM

what thoughts! awesome write!

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