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Madness |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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There is no ocean. There is no sky. They are sealed together in an envelope; locked away beyond the black curtains. I am the only player on the stage now; a soliloquy talking to dead air, suspended and spinning in a room without walls. I pinch myself; I don't even know if i am dead or alive. I cannot see beyond the starkness seizing my dreams right now............. If not for the gift of your brown eyes reeling me in from total detachment, I would fall of this ledge, screaming with madness. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-29-2003 07:46 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow!! This is a truely amazing poem! I felt this.. very powerful words.  -Meg |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I don't know what I'm going to do with you if you let the curtain come down. Michele, you make me feel normal. (right) Hey, I can fill in as your double when it gets to be oh too much for you. Hang in there girlielocks~ you can do it, you can. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I love the black curtain reference nice brown eyes . . . they must be smiling if they see you very nice Michele indeed ahhh life . . . xxoo |
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RedOz New Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 4 |
It's beautiful.....that's all I have to say Chan |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Hi. I am new here (just thought I would say). I love this poem...it truly is beautiful. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the read,,, A voice of honesty |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
If not for the gift of your brown eyes reeling me in from total detachment, I would fall of this ledge, screaming with madness. Michele, it's good to have some nice brown eyes to look into whenever things get to be too much, isn't it? I know!!  Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Enjoyed the write, not the subject. LOL |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Brown....I like eyes of all colors, preferably all at the same time.... But I know that ledge, I do. And this rodent knows good poetry when he sees it... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
sanity is encapsulaed by a subtle meniscus -- it is wonder that such a frangible membrane holds us back from the edge -- you strive in earnest goddess |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you karou, lori.....yes glad I could make you feel normal.....lol, now how bout returning the favor when im dangling... thanks, sue, you are sweet, red,thanks, mad..welcome here to pips q....thank you for stopping by again ethel.......yes it is nice, even from afar, just gotta feel his aura sometimes.....lol rat...thanks for the compliment local...the dictionary again....thanks tho i sort of understand |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
oh sorry about that goddess -- I'll try to speak English  (You doesn't have to call me Local. You can call me Rebel, or you can call me Hawke, or you can call me Reb, or you can call me Rebel Hawke, or you can call me LR, or you can call me nighthawke, but, you doesn't has to call me Local!  ) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
he doesn't like to be called anything that sounds like crazy...it would give him away [This message has been edited by passing shadows (06-29-2003 10:43 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Oh yeah..that's the stufffff Loved this mish |
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