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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-06-28 07:19 PM

Satin winds,
Tributary fingers, secret lingers
Wandering the sleek of night
Radiate the beaches in my minds delight

Dusting by,
Baring visible the beaded misty sweat
Seeking solace in the rivulet
Impetuous the pulse by moonlit amulet

The light,
Your eyes reflect in joyful spectacle
Becomes a colored rain I dance within
Exhaled faintly audible a wondered sigh so thin

Refreshed,
Fluttering the garden in my soul
In giggles nested on butterfly wings
Released at last their downy clings

Scribbles fine,
In graceful recollection’s keep
Placed near my cheek in gentle sleep
Whispered on my lips of love so deep

Copyright Kkh 6/28/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (06-28-2003 11:11 PM).]

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-06-28 07:21 PM

wow, what a wonderfully mysterious poem, this is truely a work of art.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-06-28 07:26 PM

Beautiful...James

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-06-28 07:38 PM

Fluttering the garden in my soul
In giggles nested on butterfly wings
Released at last their downy clings

terrific lines,, i enjoyed the write and read...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-06-28 07:47 PM

Wow.. this is amazing.. Great work!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2003-06-28 07:51 PM

Hey TD this is a very interesting read.
I enjoyed the unique mood.
Good work!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2003-06-28 08:10 PM

beautiful scribble indeed

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2003-06-28 11:04 PM

Now, this is a good un....and I would like
to see a giggle nested on a butterfly
wing. Draw one for me please.

Oh...a wake up...just a wake up....

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-06-29 01:43 AM

Kathleen, I love the mind set your writing puts me in,
and the places that you take me to.

I am running out of words to describe the beauty, your beauty~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2003-06-29 11:17 AM

Absolutely beautiful, TD! Your poetry always is! and...happy birthday!

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