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Gaga Moon
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Gaga Moon |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Gaga Moon A sunset colored with crape myrtle pressed like silk on blue at first stayed while I sat down to watch it drain behind the palm tree’s burst I thought no beauty could surpass it and turned to you to speak my view but you looked past with eyes celestial and dreamy with the moonlight’s hew. I watched it scale a square of building dissected by a telephone pole then climb the open angel’s stairway to rule the sky and light my soul. I knew you thought of how your Gaga loved to lay with you out back when you were just a little fella and explain its dark and glorious trek. For when the moon is at the full I see her climb into your face almost hear her voice like music and feel the warmth of her embrace. The moon at full has all the glory of the smile that touched the child and changed forever all the meaning of the night’s full moon beguile. --------- a repost just because [This message has been edited by Martie (06-13-2003 12:16 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
The imagery was so beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
...and I liked it, just because.... I'm glad when one of our best brings back one that particularly moved her...that's a guarantee of quality and depth....Thank you, Martie. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and I am glad you did.. just because. heh. seriously I somehow missed this beauty Martie.. thanks for reposting  Maree. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I loved the imagery and the rhyme, well written. Jason |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Thank you for sharing these beautiful thoughts. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dear Martie, I'm so glad that you brought this back to show us.....yes....just because And it is so beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! yes! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Have more "just because's" days, Martie... they always leave a bit of magic behind... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ 'The moon at full has all the glory of the smile that touched the child and changed forever all the meaning of the night’s full moon beguile.' I've seen that moon ... thank you for sharing it through poetic eyes~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
martie my friend... just because is sometimes the best reason... enjoyed this I did.. thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed Martie....just because.. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I love your just because.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You always paint with such magical fairy dust, Martie. A pleasure to read! Cor |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When something is this beautiful, "just because" is more than enough reason to treat us to another read. *S* I thought no beauty could surpass it and turned to you to speak my view A Martie view is always magnificent. *S* |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Martie....a lovely painting, as always. Bob |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - how my heart warmed as you took me on this wonderful journey - thanks for sharing this again - it is a first for me...Paul |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed this write,, QjQ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Martie, I love crape myrtles so much, and I would love to move down south where they blush with such romance along the magnolias and cabana palms! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you shed ight on each heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Penned ARCTIC WIND |
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