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Faded Beauty.
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Faded Beauty. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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A women, once beautifull caring truly amazing to behold now sits alone and worn at the subway station her cheeks,once gowing are pale,colourless her eyes,once full of love and hope now stare on and on at the passerby's longing wishing to one with them again wishing to be whole longing to be happy just once more but she can't she's locked in her own self hate in her own dismal life unable to escape to the beautifull world that surrounds her so she'll just sit staring on and on at the passerby's longing wishing..... ..so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time i let you... |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
very nice... I feel for her... I want to reach out to her... great write.. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Kind of sounds like my poem called Lost Women of The Street.How once they where young and had their dreams now they live on the street of saddness. Sad poem but a good write. Bonnie aka Bon-Bon |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You show your sensitive heart with this sad song. If only we could flow graciously with life, enjoying the moment, without thinking back when youth made everything sparkling. Love, Margherita  |
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