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If It Could Be
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If It Could Be |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IF IT COULD BE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ If I could play that sweet Guild right now, I’d sing to myself a song or two, play some of those sexy bluesy chords, I’ll even sing one special just for you… A song I know you’ve never heard before, because I wrote it myself from within, waiting to play it for someone special, perhaps a waiting heart to let me in… We could sit near the fire, or on the couch, I’d strum soft chords and sing a melody, of a blues man, and about lonely hearts, dreamy it would be, for just you and me… That’s exactly what I would do right now, sing a song or two for just you and me, there together sipping a glass of wine, maybe wondering if it could, if it could be… ~~~~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow think we are on the same wave today!  Loved this! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good morning BC, yet another piece of your treasured blues. You do this well. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bill, begin to sing and play and .... she will materialize magically near you. So sweet! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A song I know you’ve never heard before, because I wrote it myself from within, waiting to play it for someone special, perhaps a waiting heart to let me in… Bill, this is so beautiful...but it has so much hunger for true love in it. I hope that you will meet that special person just for you real soon!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A great romantic write. Jason |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We are so fortunate to have our fair share of romantics around... very nice, Bill. Very nice. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I keep writing songs every week and I dream of having mine get heard! (sigh) I even have a cousin who can play excellent guitar and he wants to be my lead guitarist while he encourages me to be the singer and songwriter! (big hugggsssssss) I can't wait to hear your wonderful voice more and more, sweet friend, I miss hearing you sing your songs over the phone, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
We could sit near the fire, or on the couch, I’d strum soft chords and sing a melody, of a blues man, and about lonely hearts, dreamy it would be, for just you and me… on the beach under the boardwalk, august nights bring the guitar, i'll bring the vino |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...I love the bluesy feel of this poem. Such yearning in the words like many of the blues songs. Beautifully written and beautifully expressed. ***Ivy Rose |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Looking across the room at it right now....wondering.... Thanks for the ride on your memory train....I'm on a parallel track. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
romance can be such a beautiful thing... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill: smiling at this because I know this well or knew it well I used to sit for hours and listen I do miss that This was lovely brought me right back xxoo |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I would love to hear your blues, Bill. Enjoyed this one. Patricia |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love the way you sing your beautiful songs ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It not only "could" be, it SHOULD be!  Hugs 'n luvs, EA |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC I think of all of your writings, you have definitely surpassed them all with this one. Maybe it is because you love playing your guitar and expressing your inner feelings??????????????? Really very beautiful. Ariana |
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