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My love sounds this way.....
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My love sounds this way..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Jazz band bluesy saxophone serenade come, taste the rhythm of how my desire is obeyed feel the pulse electric as you glide in passion sway listen to the lyrics my love sounds this way textured salacious singing sensuality melting slow rhythmic amber fires in love me like this, glow it’s the music of my heart you are dancing to my soul ~ you are dancing through.... ~SEA~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a fantastic dance floor! I love this! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow, I could feel the beat of this song. Very nicely played. Great job Sue.. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
SEA, awesome! Just awesome!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me girlie has been listening to Prince again.  You got your groove on and its waaay too cool and a hottie time too. Diggin your beat Susan. cool write.  All I can feel is this distance between you and me. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOOHHH, I like this, Susan.......all of it, but this...it talks to me!! textured salacious singing sensuality melting slow rhythmic amber fires in love me like this, glow Hugs, Ethel (Pssssttt!! I bet we could all dance to this poem. LOL) |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
much enjoyed... good write.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Extemely beautiful. Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very lovely, and soft jazz, yes--perhaps Sade'? This is truly SEA-style. (and my love always sounds like Santana.) Oh. Maybe that's LUST, huh?  Enjoyed the read, Sue. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very passionate! Enjoyed this read. Love, Margherita |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much Janet...you know I love that man... but yes actually Karen, I love Sade's voice, her music is fantastic, I have the cd Lover's Rock...and I love every single song..that and Norah Jones...outstanding tunes...again, thank you all very much! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Maybe a dance I have a chance at, eh?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
that depends...can you dip?  lol |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
textured salacious singing sensuality melting slow rhythmic amber fires in love me like this, glow very nice lines and a very good write... A voice of honesty |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Dang! I hoped I'd found a dance I could do...shoot.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful sounds of love, feel the beat through your words....  Charisma |
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