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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2003-06-28 07:02 AM

This convoluted dance we do
just breaks my heart and makes me blue;
you walk away - I follow you
and track rewind won't see us through.

This dance of love, I waltz in pain
the go away and come again
I feel the hurt and sense the strain
I would stop now if I'd a brain

I care too much - you care too few
and I in hope will make things new;
yet still I drink this bitter brew
and dance in spirals of love's rue.

You dance away out of my reach
I seek you out, to love beseech,
you'd think I'd learned enough to teach
there is desire we should not breach.

When I abstain from sight of you
you seek me out; plead love is true
then I return to heart of you,
resume again this dance we do.

This convoluted dance will send
one message to the very end
we cannot part - must always tend
the dance of passion, not of friend.

Blow hot and cold like chimney's flue
in convolutions of we two
the go away - return to you
are symbols of the dance we do

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-06-28 09:44 AM

Pain and joy alternatively hold your hands while you dance.
This is life. And your poem is beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-06-28 09:58 AM

Kethry
Good write, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-28 10:08 AM

yes, I understand this well

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-06-28 12:17 PM

OhKethry~
This is wonderfully done~

I miss you ... yeah, I do~
You are a beautiful lady and welcome back in our home anytime ... and even more often than that !!
Love you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-06-28 12:28 PM

Lovely rhyme Keth. Isn't this the way that
too many of us do this dance?

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2003-06-29 05:05 PM

You dance away out of my reach
I seek you out, to love beseech,
you'd think I'd learned enough to teach
there is desire we should not breach.

When I abstain from sight of you
you seek me out; plead love is true
then I return to heart of you,
resume again this dance we do.

And on and on it goes... a marathon dance that never ends... and leaves heart shards littering the floor. *S*

This is superb, Keth!! *S*

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-06-29 05:07 PM

yes, i dance it too

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2003-06-29 08:14 PM

This is one heck of a beautiful poem Kethry, if I may say and so recognizeble to many I think.

Hugs, Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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