Open Poetry #27 |
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Just Five Hours Away (For ARH). |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665![]() |
Waking i am already five hours ahead of you. My clock says eight am, yours says three am,a warmth glows inside. Washing,shaving, i think of you in your dreams and wish i could be there with you. At nine i am already going about my daily grind,to you i am ready to confide. Still four am with you,and you are still in quiet slumber, sleep deeply my precious, my flower of passion, angel of my world. My tasks for the day completed, to the computer i head. Writing my poems and posting, they are ready to be read when you awake, my words will you gently unfold. Looking for e-cards that will be special to you and your love, it is sweet pleasure to know, when you see them you will smile. Please know that if there was a bridge between our two lands, for months and years, to see you i would walk every single mile. Just knowing you are there,a kindred spirit in life to share,makes my life more real, you mean so much to me. As you work, i am just five hours ahead, already i am writing for the next day,of love, passion and wanting to be free. As i begin my sleep,you are greeting the early evening. Here's hoping happiness is in your heart and soul,love and passion stir within you, my beautiful vermilion love Queen.. |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Love know no limits of time and distance. paladin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice....it's hard to love that way, but not impossible |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Give me a ticket for an airoplane, ain't got time to take a fast train, lonely days are gone, I'm a goin' home, my baby just wrote me a letter...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful Phil. Here is something for you and your lady. "I only wish to be the fountain of love from which you drink, every drop promising eternal passion" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My Honey-Love and I are in a long distance relationship. He doesn't have a computer, so we write letters, poems and talk on the phone when we're apart. We know exactly how hard it is, though. ![]() Good luck to both of you. Hugs ![]() Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-28-2003 06:13 PM).] |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
You two are certanly great poets, and I bet that brings you even closer together. How sweet, it shows your bitter longing. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I may be five hours away, but I am close to you, there beside you, inside you, I loved this one it was so personal, detailed and I loved your ending....especially calling me your Vermilion Queen, you make me feel like the most valued treasure on earth! You make me Happy, so Happy! Love, Your Vermilion Queen |
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