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Open Poetry #27
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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
0 posted 2003-06-28 05:30 AM

Trickle through my fingers like water
my dear you have arrived
take all of me if you wish
I'm to weak to say otherwise
© Copyright 2003 Talia - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-06-28 05:52 AM

Talia!!!!
This awesomeeee . . .
damnnn yes yes yes you said it all
beautifully
xxoo
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-06-28 10:31 AM

So intensely sad ...but so very powerfully expressed.
Love, Margherita
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-06-28 10:39 AM

beautiful!
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-06-28 03:42 PM

Enjoyed...James
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