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Once when I was Dead
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Once when I was Dead |
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ljossberir Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 81Ny, USA 
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Once when I was Dead matt keach When I was dead.. well, I stayed at the sky blue house around the corner. I dated and then was wed to, a lovely brunette,infact- the governor's daughter We had two cars, a boat a dog, of course, a death you see that makes me gloat My friend Aaron who I'd known - since middle school hung with me everyday We started a rock band, Golden Hearse, We made it big - We sold out the meadowlands I was respected, revered rich, that too. Death was great 'til I was born It was great fun indeed while I was dead. Can't wait till I am dead again... the most interesting thing that happens these days - is getting bitten my mosoquitos repeatedly. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"the most interesting thing that happens these days - is getting bitten my mosoquitos repeatedly." Gawwwd, ain't that the truth....I'm here in SC and I swear, they are registering for license plates, and blood thirsty as hell!  Can't wait till winter, and then I'll be wishing it were summer again.  Wonderful write I'm not sure if I interrpreted it the way you meant, but it was wonderful to read! Thanks for sharing... P.S. I really could relate with the mosquito part......  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Waddyaknow the grateful dead returns! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To live and to be aware of mosquito bites, isn't that great? The sweet ones just help you to feel alive, don't you see? No, I am kidding, I am a victim too of those little nasty biests, but still I want to live life ... I wonder if killing these peace-killers will be considered a bad act and if in return we will have to go through a life as a mosquito? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (btw. try Vicks Vaporub!) Your poem flows ... Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Margherita! vicks vapor rub? what are you tryin' to do to the man? LOL GOD! I HATED that stuff! My mom used to put that on my chest and I choked all night long! |
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