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Parisdise - The Island
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Parisdise - The Island |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Paradise – The Island There, I saw beauty of everything I’d ever known before, and beyond…. Everything I had dreamt of or fought for Drenching me with moist smiles of air, in a Victorian laced wedding dress Azure throat yawning threads of sea, soft tangible music. Layers unfolding. equating the sum of something essential, like Sunday Mornings How exposing my soul’s intimate portrait. Delving into an endless quiet noise (white sound) Penetrating throughout nights and days, of a drunken voyage engaged Waiting for the last entrees to spend themselves, dripping a genuine need of diverse imagination. I sailed as a child encompassed in this simplicity, returning to sobriety and the immobilization of love, both fortune and peril. Within that incredible fiber of imaginations, I recognized myself again, The intense poet of self-examination. Within this swollen element, there is a prophetic quality, Like an entire ocean indoctrinating the mind’s equality… And intellectual admiration! An exaggerated composition on our right side, unraveling man from child, day from night, linking a generous conviction, softly articulating mission, the four encompassed trade winds, combined everything into one sound, a multiple language, all in it’s own…Translating destiny….literally dedicating a lifetime of community service for eternity. How we use it is entirely up to us And so upon return, there to that place in time, I will refresh and be opened again To this tremendous touch, of the hand of nature, sea, soil, love; and God.! The island was just like you said, and more. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Delving into an endless quiet noise (white sound) Penetrating throughout nights and days, of a drunken voyage engaged Waiting for the last entrees to spend themselves, dripping a genuine need of diverse imagination. I sailed as a child encompassed in this simplicity, returning to sobriety and the immobilization of love, both fortune and peril. Within that incredible fiber of imaginations, I recognized myself again, The intense poet of self-examination." holy..wow.. You're amazing at this, you know?  |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Hi Lee J. Looks like a very interesting site. Thanks for sending the link. Another beauty to add to your library of fantastic poetry. Your friend Love Bon-Bon |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write!!! lee,,,i see you sent bon bon the link very good thoughts!!! now i remember who you are,, i thought i had seen you on another forum,,  A voice of honesty is treasured more than voices of flattery QjQ [This message has been edited by QjQ (06-27-2003 11:46 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this...James |
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