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Open Poetry #27

When I Close My Eyes.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-27 06:23 PM

When i close my eyes
i'm not shutting you out
i'm inviting you in
when i close my eyes
i see the real you
the one full of hope and beautifull words
when i close my eyes
i dream of love
i dream of you
when i close my eyes
i'm letting go
i feel free
when i close my eyes
i'm letting you see me

..so kiss me hard cause this wil be the last time that i let you

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-06-27 06:57 PM

Ahh what wonders can we see when we close our eyes.
Beautiful write!
Love, Margherita

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-06-28 12:43 PM

terrific write,,,

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-28 12:45 PM

wow! love this!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2003-06-28 12:46 PM

"When i close my eyes
i'm not shutting you out
i'm inviting you in"

wow...what a wonderful way of saying it...a IWIWI ( I wish I wrote it) kind of poem...

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

5 posted 2003-06-28 12:59 PM

"When i close my eyes
i'm not shutting you out
i'm inviting you in"

Beautiful!

Tima C

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-28 04:19 AM

Beautiful write Chelsea
Not everyone sees this way
xxoo

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