Sustain.....( short alliteration)

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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2003-06-27 05:48 PM

Reserve.........refrain
control.......contain
mute........maintain
distill........disdain
expel............explain
appease......... again
illusion....................ingrain
smile......sustain

~SEA~

Cpat Hair

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1 posted 2003-06-27 05:49 PM

smile.... is lovely on you my friend...

Wind

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2 posted 2003-06-27 05:49 PM

simple and perfect.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2003-06-27 05:51 PM

Ron~

Wind~ thanks

Auguste

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By the sea

4 posted 2003-06-27 06:03 PM

pretty neat!

MysticDreamer
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5 posted 2003-06-27 06:05 PM

unique and creative

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-06-27 06:31 PM

Unique...just like you Susan.
Lovely indeed.
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

vandana

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7 posted 2003-06-27 07:31 PM

enjoyed

garysgirl

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8 posted 2003-06-27 08:23 PM

I like this, Sea....
but I knew that I would when I saw your name.

Hugs

Ethel

Magnus

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9 posted 2003-06-27 08:42 PM

simply silky substance
so softly said
takes time too!

Once upon a time, not so long ago...a
so called poet (me) didn't know how to
spell alliteration, let alone know what
it was... super subject Sue!

Auguste

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By the sea

10 posted 2003-06-27 09:02 PM

Also very sad... a shame it took me another read to realize that.

SEA

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with you

11 posted 2003-06-27 09:07 PM

thank you all very much, and Michael, you are right, it was meant to be sad....thanks for reading it again

LeeJ
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12 posted 2003-06-27 09:21 PM

your poems have a way of speaking to the heart....thank you for writing and sharing.

timothysangel1973

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Never close enough

13 posted 2003-06-27 09:55 PM

"mute........maintain"

...Hey, I had to pick a favorite line...haha

I can relate with each of those very well!

Great write!

Mistletoe Angel

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14 posted 2003-06-28 06:54 PM

(smiles) Oh Susan, this is beautiful, sweet friend, a smile ttruly holds in place from end to end and this poem certainly does build that glorious bridge to, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Ericc
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15 posted 2003-06-28 08:23 PM

I loved this...very creative!
Eric

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