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Open Poetry #27

Desires of a Breaking Day

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-06-27 03:03 PM

Softly touch my heart
slowly undress me
with your eyes
gently with a torrid
and sultry way
and I will not ever
forsake you
it is only you that
I desire
when I open my eyes
each breaking day

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-27-2003 04:38 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-27 04:55 PM

Wonderful work, beautiful.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-06-27 05:06 PM

Nice writing...looks like you have it bad for her...James

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-06-27 05:31 PM

beautiful write, good luck, many good wishes for happiness sent along

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-06-27 05:57 PM

Your breaking day holds love. Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-06-27 08:30 PM

a warm thanks to all who responded,,
i treasure your replies...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

6 posted 2003-06-27 09:56 PM

A very special love write.
So extra sweet!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

7 posted 2003-06-27 10:05 PM

"gently with a torrid
and sultry way"

WooHoo, I love it!

Tima C

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