Open Poetry #27 |
Slave of Passions |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
just a glimpse of you makes my blood rush like a raging river the sounds you hear are not the roar of the ocean waves it's my blood rushing through my veins the sound of your whisper is like that of a song bird fragrances of you intoxifies my senses a touch from you sends volts through my body I surrender my all to you take me as your slave of passion all your loving wishes are my commands A voice of honesty is treasured more than voices of flattery QjQ [This message has been edited by QjQ (06-27-2003 04:40 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
smiles and hugs...that voice of passion speaks and thinks for us all in one....and we have no other road to take, then to follow along helplessly and hopelessly in love. Good write my friend....warmth and loving heart. |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
good write... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
men like you still exist? |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Most definitely a heartfelt write! She's a very fortunate gal! 'Hope she's returning that kind of love! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - Always remember to keep them fluffed but, never, EVER ruffle them! [This message has been edited by JilGirl (06-27-2003 06:13 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a warm thanks to all who responded,, i treasure your replies... A voice of honesty |
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