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Open Poetry #27

Rough Yet So Soft

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-06-27 05:56 AM

Music so rough,
reeking with life,
quaking hardships,
melodies singing deep.

Notes of emotion,
exploding feelings,
orchestrated turmoil,
storming realities.

Beauty letting loose,
frustrated voices within clarity,
crystal clear reverberations,
chilling truth echoing experience.

Fantastic presentation,
paramount understanding,
words seeking redemption,
moisture around happiness crying.

Nature’s harmony,
floating blue sky,
trees’s dancing,
mellow sound breezes.

Night skies sparkling,
soul’s serenity,
blanketing warmth,
music so soft.

Thought: The perfect understanding – letting your soul sing in its own clarity, riding with your emotions of ever changing mental stimulations.
D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 06/24/03

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-28 12:36 PM

very nice !!!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-06-28 10:40 PM

A wonderful footnote to compliment your poem.
Thanks for the nice write, and your comforting thoughts.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-03 03:38 AM

always love your ending thoughts

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