»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #27
»
Memories (repost from Teen)
| Open Poetry #27 |
|
Memories (repost from Teen) |
|
|
devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571
|
I was in the Teen Forums but I wasn`t getting much feedback. I had been in this forum a few times and it seemed very welcoming so I will try it out and most likely stay here. This poem was a favorite of a friend of mine.... I sit here in this attic Boxes,letters,and photographs lying around me Dust covered memories Lifeless,still frames Eyes closed tightly Tears rushing down This memory won`t come back Lost forever in this forgotten moment Please come back to me Lost like the tide Until you rise again I will be waiting on the shore line Memories |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved | |||
skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very nicely written, Allison, and very sad too. Well done.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed this, even in its sadness welcome to open! |
||
|
gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
this is very sincere, i think you got a great writing on your hands.keep posting,was this about someone you know.? |
||
|
devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
A while ago my grandpa passed away and my grandma moved out of their old house. My family and I went to go help her pack. I remember being in the living room with her and she had a huge box opened up with papers spilling out of them...I asked her what they were and she looked up at me teary-eyed and told me that they were love letters from my grandpa to her when he was in the service..She then went on to tell me some stories of the romantic things he had done for her. It was one of the moments in my life I will never forget...Even in old age. *Allison* |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Allison, I too found those old pictures in the attic, some of which reminded me of far ago times, most very tender and a treasure, some not so dear to me, but all priceless.... as are your own.. |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate, this is a favorite of mine too  |
||
|
devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Thanx to all of you for the very nice replys! I love to check my emails and see that I have replies to my poems! lol Thanks again! *Allison* |
||
|
Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Glad you came to open Poetry! Enjoyed your heartfelt, emotional Poem ARCTIC WIND |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
