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18 candles |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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18 candles on a birthday cake I never got. 18 words you could've said to me but you did not. Exactly 18 reasons why I've come and gone. 18 candles burn out and I've still got my words that set the whole cake on fire. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hmm, interesting write. Very interesting write. I like it, it's different... but did someone really ignore your b-day? It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is tragic. I love the style, though. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh to be 18 again! a nice write  Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
If this is true to life............Happy Be-lated Birthday sweet Kaoru! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"Happy eighteenth birthday, And if you are feeling alone... I wish blessings upon you, That you've never known!" There! That's eighteen words. I remember the questions that came at my eighteenth, too, and hope you will find some encouragement here. ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
a very different style indeed |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Aww, you guys are very sweet. Thank you for the great replies. *Hugs* |
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