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B3jamboree Junior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 33Michigan |
Good Girls Good girls don't like Boys Who smoke a pack a day Who waste their time away Drinking and smoking And about it have nothing To say Nice girls don't date Guys Who live at home with mom Who skipped senior prom Got a hotel And just sat around and Got Bombed Real chicks don't dig Dudes Who don't know how to dress Whose hair is always a mess Sleeping until noon And still don't have a thing to Confess I can write you poetry that'll make a strong man lose his mind: |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
who says they don't?...lol...welcome to passions...h |
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B3jamboree Junior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 33Michigan |
Hello everyone, I am new to this site. I haven't been writting poetry very long and I have never studied it so feel free to critique in any way. My feelings will not be hurt. If you want to read almost all of my poems you can go to http://nocatnocradle.curvedspaces.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Well, I am nineteen and I still live with my parents and I didn't go to my senior prom because no one invited me, so I guess I don't qualify! (giggles) Just kidding, though what I said is true! This is an excellent debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Christopher, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Christopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hmmm... I see you haven't met Toerag yet Just kidding Toe, you know we love ya! Good job, and very true I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Hmmm, sounds like my husband.... Some of us gals are drawn to the Rebel man! Great write, much enjoyed!  |
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B3jamboree Junior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 33Michigan |
Wow, you guys are really, really nice. This is really great. You folks made my day! Or night, rather. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Chris - Welcome to PIP! You will love it here Please check your email for a special greeting! xxoo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Heh, this poem is pretty cool  I don't know what to say about it, really... I guess this means I'm not a nice girl? Wahh.. (Loved it!) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You may be right. Personally, I always thought there were enough bad girls around to keep me busy until I get too old to remember why I was interested. *smile* Welcome to PIP! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions! Good write! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
B3, Welcome to Passions. Enjoyed your critique message - and I'll jump right in and say if you want to know more about poetry, check the Poetry Workshop. Our moderator Nan is always accepting new students who want to learn more, and I think you'll not only find it interesting, but fun, too. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
enjoyed and welcome If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Good girls don't...but I do..." The Knack Made me smile this morning. Welcome to Passions. (love the Dylan quote too) |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I beg to differ  Welcome to pip. It's always great to see a new face in the family! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hmmmm.....so that's where I went wrong!! lol. Welcome to Passions! Good write. Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Welll..... at least it's nice to know that the bevy of female admirers that always seem to surround a guy like that may not be real after all...or at least may not be good.... This a first post, eh? It's a good one, and I'll look forward to more! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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