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Open Poetry #27

darkness falls

yourheart
New Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 4

0 posted 2003-06-26 08:50 PM

leave me to bleed within
this pool of abolished love
my heart a tool, a forsaken dove
so lead me on again, i cried
but her selfish mind
for now, i died

thinking back were happy times
cought up within your frame of mind
set me free for now i dreamed
but darkness falls and i did scream

end this now to drown my sorrow
while i screamed theres no tomorrow
so leave me here to bleed within
this pool of abolished love

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-26 09:16 PM

Nice write!

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-06-26 10:16 PM

"so leave me here to bleed within
this pool of abolished love"

Nice write...loved this line!

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