Open Poetry #27 |
Harken |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Harken I have cloaked myself in iron a heavy burden to bear yet you allow me to reveal myself unashamed in words one soul harkens another stands naked bare "i am out of estrogen and i have a gun" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hmmm you and the last part of this image just feels so right..grins aye I know the feeling |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I just love your writing stile. You're so original. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
This is great!! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
And you practice the deceptive arts too? You just want us to THINK this is a small little poem. I'm on to you . . . |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is one of your coolest, ever |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And that is exactly how it's suposed to be. Beautifully said, oh lady of slickness... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
The truth...exposed! Finally. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the write...love the signature line |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen: there is nothing more sacred than bearing your soul as you have . . . beautiful xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
yet you allow me to reveal myself unashamed Your words gave me such a good feeling. *shrug* I think there is alot of truth in the saying, that we are our worst enemy. Nice poem Helen, and thanks~ |
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