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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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You my life was a weed till you came with the knife and cut me a rose "i am out of estrogen and i have a gun" |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Food for thought. It's more complex than it appears.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Utterly beautiful like the author inside and out..  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
this is a nice surprise! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOVE IT!!! Perfect! ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The rose emerges From amidst protective thorns In resplendent bloom |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lovely. Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen: this is perfection . . . xxoo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely beautiful as always. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sometimes the difference between a thornbush and a rose is a bit of pruning by someone who loves the plant and recognized what it can be. ....and it just took me more words to respond, than it took you to write this beauty! You're amazing, sometimes. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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