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Wind riding
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Wind riding |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA 
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A hand softly closed my eyes A sigh shed a tear A wave crashed Lightning flashed A siren roared The thought was floored Seconds ticked Voices cracked Eyes pushed open Satin washed them And the sounds danced As color pranced No more wind Hands held me Then I rode the wind |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I liked this and then at the end I didn't understand it. Did you go free or not? Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Kethry - I will let you know - Paul |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I'll be waiting for the answer either on this side or the next Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
What a completely clear description! Very well done, Sir. Thank you for shring this. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Keth - I hope it is free! Paul |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul listening to those inner voices makes good poetry...you ride the wind! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I guess you can never truly tell until you go out for a ride of your own! (big hugggssssssss) Sometimes the hands feel just like a seat belt, otherwise they could strangle, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Paul...love the images you have evoked here. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow, this is haunting! Well done, GK....you really took me on this ride. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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