Open Poetry #27 |
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So Long Gone From The Rivers Of Babylon |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
When the lights of Paris are dimming, and sunrise licks at the Rhine, I know your day is beginning while I'm slowly shutting down mine. Will you join me this evening in my dreams? Will we walk once again on the sands of an empire lost to the ages? Will you sit with me holding my hand? Time has granted us two things, awareness of past lives together, and hardships that help us to grow. I wish my eyes saw the future as clearly as I see the past, but half of each life I spend wandering, picking up threads from the last. So walk with me this night, in my dreams, we'll stroll by the Rivers of Time, secure in the soft understanding that I am your's as you are mine. ©2003 by icebox |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox....Thank you for sharing this love that passes time and place barriers and still lights your dreams. |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"I wish my eyes saw the future as clearly as I see the past, but half of each life I spend wandering, picking up threads from the last." Hey Ice...are you in my mind this morning? Wonderful write! ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I too spend my life in that fashion, and look forward to dreams to rekindle what I missed, and it's quite lovely. I am so enjoying your poetry. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How utterly lovely. This evokes visions and longings... Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooooooo...just gorgeous! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
icebox - you're are an excellant writer. I enjoy your words and thoughts... BC |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This is so very beautiful, Icebox, and so much more than mere writing ability I'm inclined to think. Whatever and from wherever it comes, it speaks a truth not many people can truly understand. |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
whimisical. thanks for the memories. ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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