Silence (rictameter - 1st attempt)

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Open Poetry #27

Silence (rictameter - 1st attempt)

quatro
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0 posted 2003-06-25 11:48 PM

Silence

Silence
a peaceful sound
proclaiming every word
that is spilled from my lover's mouth
quinching his puckered lips
then becons for
a kiss.

quatro

Kaoru

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where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-25 11:55 PM

Wow, awesome

Mistletoe Angel

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2 posted 2003-06-26 12:23 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, Naome, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, some things just don't have to be said because you can read the tears and smiles from someones face! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is pure ecstacy of poetry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Naome, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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3 posted 2003-06-26 01:54 AM

quatro
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4 posted 2003-06-26 12:47 PM

Karou,

Thank you for reading. I appreciate it.

quatro

quatro
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5 posted 2003-06-26 12:49 PM

Mistletoe Angel,

I always loved spending time among friends. It's been a pleasure.

quatro

quatro
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6 posted 2003-06-26 12:50 PM

Passing Shadows,

I look forward to your passes and how your shadow gives me the comfort of a friend.

quatro

ecrivan
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7 posted 2003-06-27 12:28 PM

enjoyed the read

becons has a typo...should be beckons

timothysangel1973

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8 posted 2003-06-27 01:09 AM

Very good

vandana

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9 posted 2003-06-28 10:06 AM

enjoyed

JilGirl
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10 posted 2003-06-28 03:17 PM

"First" rictameter?
VERY, very GOOD! Has a natural flow!
Good subject matter, too!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

quatro
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11 posted 2003-06-30 01:37 AM

Timothy, Vandana & JilGirl,

Thanks for stopping by and reading.

quatro

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