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If you were (haiku sort of)
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If you were (haiku sort of) |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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If you were the sea Oh if you were the ocean I could drown in you I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
I like this! And it's not a "sort of" ~ It's a real haiku! Love the reference to the ocean! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
good thing.. myself, I have a fear in drowning in anything these days...love..ocean...my own sadness.  Lovely writing. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this goes in my library.....without question excellent |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 sooooo glad you're back. this speaks volumes. i hope whoever this is about, is worthy of you girl. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Awesome job had a hard time writing these myself lucky one indeed xxoo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done! now...don't forget to wear a life vest when you are in that deep water..  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're a good swimmer, Wind - a good writer too...  |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Loved this I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wind...Enjoyed this! Well done haiku! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
one of my faves. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
An excellent write.You hit it on the nail. angelblueyes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful, Liz. I love it! Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, this is beautiful. You are very talented, my little friend.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
if only...loved this! |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I could use a swim, too... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely haiku Wind !! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful beautiful!!! This is one for my keeper file! Very much enjoyed. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol I saw one that said Wind and wow look at all the replys..I'm suspecting that Gemma bumped it..thanks guys sigh.. |
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