Open Poetry #27 |
Alone |
SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
Alone The sun may be shining but I'm still cold The lights may be on but I'm left in the dark Cant seem to understand why nothing means what it should Needles are raining down on me I cant seem to get out of my mind I'm scratching at the walls of time I want an escape an everlasting vacation All the hands that were once held out have become invisible I just need someone to be there for me I need someone to care I thought I had all the friends in the world but now as I open my eyes, for the first time, it seems, That theres no one here Im all alone |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Great write, I really felt this one.. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I don't know if you want words of comfort, but sometimes things are left best as they are. Honey, we're all alone inside. I find it comforting, but it scares others. Good write. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I hear ya.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
You ain't alone...you got us!!!!! Great one! Tima Please visit my website: www.southerncountrywebdesign.com/~heart/ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, I have felt alone many times, and sometimes it feels very sad and sometimes I like it...at times I have endured being alone because I knew that a relationship I was in must come to an end...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very sad but heartfelt words, friends you will have and you already have here at pip/ Thank you for sharing your words. Goldenrose. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sad Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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