Open Poetry #27 |
We Are...And Yet We're Not |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Not this. No...we are less than this. And yet...somehow we are always more. We are the question that remains after every answer. We are the layers underneath the bareness of each other. We are the lie to every truth and the reality in all that is fake. We are this. yet we're not. And somehow ...it all makes perfect sense. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I don't have a clue why this poem was sitting with a big 0 on it. I like the read and feel of this piece. Nicely done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful thoughts Eric as always! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oh i do love your words yanno..back to the top...xxxxx |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc: yes yes and yes We are the lie to every truth and the reality in all that is fake. Awesome lines truly xxoo |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"We are the question that remains after every answer. We are the layers underneath the bareness of each other." oh, I do like this, very much |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is simply wonderful |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"We are the lie to every truth and the reality in all that is fake." *Stroke of genious in your pen* Wonderful write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write Eric! |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
All of what seems to be nonsense, is... for a Divine reason. It is for us to learn and explore and find the Truth and Light in the clouds and confusion. And what a beautiful journey this is. Beautiful, magic, profound words, dear poet... you are a gift with a gift. Thank you for sharing. I love you. Moca |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To be ALL makes perfect sense. You navigate in realms of divine enlightenment. Love, Margherita |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
We are the question that remains after every answer. Oh, gosh do I know this. Excellent write, Ericc. Patricia |
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