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Summer Day |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The ducks Gliding on in Touching the lake wings spread To hung the breeze Lose flight. Gliding now on water to shoreline of grasses, Where sleeping in sunlight brown puppy rolls over, White step stones for walking with boarder of flowers The kitty lays waiting now crouching in clover, Paddle Quickly serene To birch woods cool shadow Over shallows Floating The kitty now wanders still seeking adventure, Brown puppy in waking sees the flock that’s drifting Jumps into the water now swimming as wings spread Left below in the lake they’re skyward up lifting. The ducks Away flying Hawk higher in the sun Comes diving down Capture The kitty now dozing in branches of old oak Is yawning at puppy that’s barking just below Till pretty butterfly flitters by distracting, It’s lively not sleepy so away he will go. On wings The duck fly west And the sun goes along The hawk feasting In stones. Much later the puppy comes bouncing to the tree And finding the kitty still sleeping contently So barking he’s telling adventures now complete Kitty yawns and stretches then climbs high in the tree. Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sometimes you gotta hit them with a 2 x 4 to wake them up...remember always....sometimes people need proof...especially after some rough sailing...actions speak louder then words...and perhaps in this case words are needed directly to the core of the issues at hand. Beautiful write, creative and thoughtprovokingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice,,, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed very much!  ARCTIC WIND |
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