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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-25 07:57 AM



Limited

there are limits
to what is
and no words
will change it
no reason in
its sound
or a waste of ink
and maybe…
my words
have nothing
left to give
for what
I gave was
the best
I had
and there isn’t
any more
just wished
you knew
the most important
thing about
my soul
is that love
is my
greatest strength
and my deepest
weakness



© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-06-25 07:59 AM


1slick_lady
Correct on both, enjoyed.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-06-25 07:59 AM


and it's really all we have to give, isn't it?  The greatest gift which we can endow life with...beautiful write...if it is any help...these words touched my soul, deeply...when all seems frail...reach deeper for more, and somehow that adreniline always kicks in for those not so nice times. Love to you
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-06-25 08:12 AM


is that love
is my
greatest strength
and my deepest
weakness

A sign of a most beautiful soul, though battered by extremes in this place I'd like to dream that in the end there's some sort of special sanctuary set aside for them..failing that see you in basket weaving class..grins and hugs in no particular order

Patricia
Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
4 posted 2003-06-25 08:25 AM


And that is what we should give.  Love knows no limits.  

I love your verses.  I learn so much in so many ways.

Patricia

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-06-25 02:45 PM


pure beauty
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2009-03-23 03:36 PM


Limits indeed ~ All around there are limits, sometimes for the best!!


ARCTIC WIND

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