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Reflection of Scars
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Reflection of Scars |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california 
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Reflection of Scars The picking of a future scar Reflecting skills not up to par A blemish one can readily hide Though truth in heart will still reside Scars Like pain onto a runners side with every step ones stomach churn Insane with thoughts of enthocide Ones heart forgets to yearn Try to hide Will you shade my light from growth? Resume as sheltered skin? pigment raw from flesh unseen craving for any a kin Try to heal Unveil the wonders behind the door of glass Depression from perfection must be flaccid Praying open, open, open but alas Such a door has not been crafted Try to accept |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I loved this poem..it rocked my socks! "Praying open, open, open but alas Such a door has not been crafted" You're good, so good. :P |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Acceptance leads to surrendering and surrendering leads to grace...  A poem that was worthy of a second read! Warm hugs, EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joe~ WONDERFUL~ 'Try to accept' A worthy goal that we all should stive for~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
where have you been hiding yourself? this is awesome Joe! A keeper, for sure! Keep on writin'! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed,, |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Joe - I like your style! well written piece Bravo Bello! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Fantastic writing... Thanx4sharing... *~coco~* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Ugh, Scars, past memories stuck, but sometimes, as weird as this sounds, sometimes, they are good memories!  ARCTIC WIND |
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