You Make Me Want To Live...

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Open Poetry #27

You Make Me Want To Live...

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-24 08:51 PM

I feel comlete
i feel new
like a neatly packaged candy
when you hold me in your arms its as if nothings
wrong
its like i'm floating on air
and everyday i ask myself
how did such a beautful soul fall in love with me
when you look at me
with those big blue eyes
i melt
you make me feel something no one has evr made me feel
...you make me want to live...
*yay for happy poems!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-06-25 01:16 AM

LOL, yay for happy poems? OK, guess that means I'll have to cough up another one for you, and then you get to regurgitate(YUCK!)with a happy one from your poetry pile.

it's nice to have a special someone

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-06-25 01:32 AM

"...you make me want to live..."

I really like the way you ended this...it definately punctuates the love

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-06-25 02:05 AM

"I feel comlete
i feel new
like a neatly packaged candy
when you hold me in your arms its as if nothings
wrong"

This says it all, this could be the poem in it's entirety!

Great Piece Of Work!!

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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2003-06-25 03:09 AM

This was sweet I can relate!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-25 03:39 AM

yay for happy poems!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2003-06-26 09:37 AM

I like this very much, exhale! *S* So I'll add my yay, too! *S*

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