Open Poetry #27 |
Sweet Reminders |
Shadows of Time Junior Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 14 |
The gentle pattering The rustle of the lush leaves being kissed lightly by the descending rainfall The evening skies Filled with the mystical display of nature that is brilliant and blinding lighting The torrential echoing of far off thunder, The tremendous rumbling that crescendos from a whisper The tranquil swaying to and fro These awe inspiring things, these little things The flowers flourishing in that jungle of a garden Remind me of you, with your sweet lilac hair Sitting there on that porch, swinging back and forth All of it does, especially when I’m away from you And it soothes me, producing a smile across my face All these things are sweet reminders to me Reminders of why I care for you the way I do |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Luscious...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It's the little things that make us remember... Lovely write. ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice thoughts *s M |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Very nice. Peace. ~*~ Kirah ~*~ "Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Oooh I needed this right now. Thank you. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Very pretty, thank you for reminding me to pay attention to THE LITTLE THINGS in the one that I love....Bless his heart he screws up so much, I forget that he's the only one that thinks I am beautiful in the morning....and that is worth loving if nothing else is.....HaHa Great write!! Tima Please visit my website: www.southerncountrywebdesign.com/~heart/ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WONDERFUL! ARCTIC WIND |
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