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Shadows of Time
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0 posted 2003-06-24 06:29 PM



The gentle pattering
The rustle of the lush leaves being kissed lightly by the descending rainfall
The evening skies
Filled with the mystical display of nature that is brilliant and blinding lighting
The torrential echoing of far off thunder,
The tremendous rumbling that crescendos from a whisper
The tranquil swaying to and fro
These awe inspiring things, these little things
The flowers flourishing in that jungle of a garden
Remind me of you, with your sweet lilac hair
Sitting there on that porch, swinging back and forth
All of it does, especially when I’m away from you
And it soothes me, producing a smile across my face
All these things are sweet reminders to me
Reminders of why I care for you the way I do

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-06-24 06:42 PM


Luscious...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-06-24 06:43 PM


It's the little things that make us remember...
Lovely write.
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-06-24 07:24 PM


very nice thoughts
*s
M

WindSong
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Long Island, New York
4 posted 2003-06-24 09:16 PM


Very nice. Peace. ~*~ Kirah ~*~

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie


KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
5 posted 2003-06-25 09:52 PM


Oooh I needed this right now. Thank you.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

timothysangel1973
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6 posted 2003-06-25 09:54 PM


Very pretty, thank you for reminding me to pay attention to THE LITTLE THINGS in the one that I love....Bless his heart he screws up so much, I forget that he's the only one that thinks I am beautiful in the morning....and that is worth loving if nothing else is.....HaHa

Great write!!

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passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-06-26 02:38 AM


nice
Artic Wind
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8 posted 2009-03-30 07:53 PM


WONDERFUL!


ARCTIC WIND

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