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Open Poetry #27

Carnival

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-24 03:41 PM

I could shoot an arrow
through this dense air,
and still my words would not
get to you..

The sun sets in mild sky,
I watch for the lunar
eclipse..
And I've been
raped from head to toe my
body screams anguish, and
I already know what's going to be said..

Let's..
Go to the carnival and
sing the songs the carousel plays,
it's right by the cemetary..
where my old heart lay..
And we can ride white horses
untill dawn.

But my words will not scream
and I don't remember the songs..

Crushed velvet, the sky..
I let the canvas dry in
a set motion..
to display
that my words will never make
their way..

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-06-24 03:48 PM

Enjoyed...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-08-13 10:04 PM

I could shoot an arrow
through this dense air,
and still my words would not
get to you..

The sun sets in mild sky,
I watch for the lunar
eclipse.............................."

Wonderful poetic Write, I love these to parts

ARCTIC WIND

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2008-08-14 02:42 AM

How did I every miss this one? I loved the ride, sort of another page of life as I knew it myself once. Well done - give that cute dickins of yours a hug for me.

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