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Sentimental..... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 He left me wanting in pools of moon kept my heart held in soft sigh of swoon Breathy whisper achings I hear his sad croon quiet reverent hushes my soul plays his tune I see his eyes, feel his touch but he leaves me, much too soon all alone I splash in puddles memories, of yesterday’s June and still he leaves me, wanting heart and soul drenched in moon forever, on my lips in sigh sentimental, soft swoon ~SEA~ |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
This guys sounds like a player, your better off without him. lol =) But really this was very good Joe |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
laughing at joe's response. Sue this is fantastic writing as always look forward to your words |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Loving heart echoes encore in longing for more Sue most beautifully expressed Hope |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
what a picture-- the one at the top and the one you painted with words. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I see his eyes, feel his touch but he leaves me, much too soon all alone I splash in puddles memories, of yesterday’s June" I'll splash in the puddles with ya Susan!!! It's supposed to be in the 90's tomorrow!  (Ya had to go and remind me of the date didn't ya???  ) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue: memories of yesterday's June . . . this is beautiful xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sea, this is achingly beautiful.  Hugs  Ethel |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Joe~ laughing...it wasn’t meant that way  thank youRaph~ you are nice to me, thank you for that  Hope~ yes, like that thank youEdder~ how nice, thanks! Cowboy~ anytime btw I am so sunburned lol |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sue~ thanks very much Ethel~ thank you! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Susan, this is beautiful, sweet friend, how I'd love to hear the sentimental swan song of my future love, yay, this is just comforting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see his eyes, feel his touch but he leaves me, much too soon all alone I splash in puddles memories, of yesterday’s June and still he leaves me, wanting heart and soul drenched in moon forever, on my lips in sigh sentimental, soft swoon ================================ I am swooning now... ahhhhhh the alliterations...the assonance.. the rhymes...and last but never least.. the ache. Love the soulful, sensual undercurrent in this Sea-girly...a bittersweet beauty here. Ive said before...some things never leave us...somethings never should |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful...does he have a brother? |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Brilliant rymeing style and fantastic special chosen words. Great write as usual sea. thank you for them. Goldenrose. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... now this is a wonderful love poem... the kind I have always so enjoyed from your pen.. Good work my friend... I truly enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You KNOW I love this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely lovely Sue..very much enjoyed the read on this hot summer's morn. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Girl...next time its your turn...to tease to tempt...then leave him with that lovely ache...beautiful. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember a young girl who came in saying "teach me..." and now look at who is teaching whom.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Basking in your moon beams is always such a pleasure. But the sand in my pants...  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just beautiful SEA! hugs, Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This guy left too soon. Hey, the pic reminds me of one night here when the moon was full and hanging low over the ocean. It didn't look real, just like something out of a painting. A lovely poem and equally lovely picture to go with it, Susan. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
He leaves me, wanting. This says it all tender words, lovely write. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely picture, but an emotionally poetic piece SEA! ~ I enjoyed this deeply to youARCTIC WIND |
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