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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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No Need today I find myself a little bit stronger the dull ache still there yet, as I read the words I wrote I am thankful that you at one time let me love you and in its short span changed me showing me want without need thank you |
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idleeyes86 Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 64Somewhere over the rainbow |
I really like the way (whether it was intentional or not) that you say "let me love you" rather than for example "you loved me" or something. I think the whole getting-over-someone phase is something everybody can probably relate to and for me this was very touching Everybody hurts, take comfort in your friends, cos everybody hurts sometimes |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely as usual Helen. Enjoyed. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
You found the bright side. I like that about you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
it's always better to want than to need. good stuff. Joe |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Love that ending r |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
"I am thankful that you at one time let me love you" A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (06-13-2003 11:59 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
everything is life is short another awesome write from your heart |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful... and so very touching. *S* It's hard for gratitude to overcome the grieving... but it's part of healing. *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I am thankful that you at one time let me love you and in its short span changed me showing me want without need thank you Helen, I believe that no matter how painful our past was, it is a step to our growth. Even if we sometimes wish it had never happened, it does make us into the people we become. Yhank you for this.  Hugs  Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
How they do change us hey H? sigh. bump^^^^ Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
great...just great |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Simply beautiful, Helen. This gave me a smile. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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