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Open Poetry #27
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Always Lisa
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2003-06-23 03:47 PM


Daisy

Near a brook by crooked pine...
Daisy stood in May's warm breeze
Soaking in the green around  
Swaying like the crooked trees.    

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-24 06:10 AM

nice, flows well
ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
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India
2 posted 2003-06-24 06:49 AM

nice poem
but too short
may be you can extend it
Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19
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London, England
3 posted 2003-06-24 07:54 AM

says all it needs to. i like it
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-08-13 01:48 PM

Nicely Described!


ARCTIC WIND
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