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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Serenity waits upon transitions peak The dawn follows night's darkness Lighting answers I seek Invisible questions were laying in wait Undiscovered old riddles In their fossilized states I look back in wonder at paths I have climbed Through the puzzles of shadow, which have marked this incline. To finally reach craggy cliffs with a view Where I see "ALL" the pieces of life's mystery clues [This message has been edited by bags123 (06-23-2003 04:13 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Awesome wording, great write  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
We get so caught up in the microcosmic view of life, that we fail to see the big picture. Enjoyed your thoughts--and your poetic expression of them!  Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice writing! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice placement of words,,, A voice of honesty |
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