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pisumnux
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 49
Troy, NY

0 posted 2003-06-23 01:16 PM

They say time flies when you're having fun,
like lying around awaiting the sun,
or eating some cheese while sipping some wine,
or gently massaging your lips with mine.
Wherever we go, whatever we do,
I'll always be happy if I'm with you.
I may not be great making a rhyme,
but when I'm with you, I lose track of time.
I'm going to stop before I get stuck.
Just know I love you, ...

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-23 01:26 PM

How romantic. *sighs*

Cold hands means a warm heart

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-06-23 05:48 PM

You rhymed quite OK to me, but of course
I knew you would... Good poem...thanx.

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

3 posted 2003-06-23 06:19 PM

~sigh~ neither can i. ooopps

well done

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-06-23 06:34 PM

Happy heart, very lovely poem!
Love, Margherita

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-06-23 08:02 PM

Andrew - this is so sweet
Has she seen this?
xxoo

pisumnux
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 49
Troy, NY

6 posted 2003-06-23 08:14 PM

I don't think she has seen this yet, but she will when she checks the forum next.

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-06-23 09:07 PM

....A sweet old-fashioned girl with heart so true,
One who likes to...

....read poetry with some wit in it!

Me too...and just did....

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Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

8 posted 2003-06-24 01:17 AM

very beautiful,i still don't know what ive done to inspire you to write such lovely poems for me.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-06-24 02:05 AM

awww how sweet . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-06-24 03:40 AM

nice

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2008-08-12 10:43 PM

Is it just me, or are you rhyming lol
you're cured, you can Rhyme now

ARCTIC WIND

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