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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-06-12 12:10 PM



~*~

Lying by the river's edge
In clover pink and white,
My eyes scan the skies above,
'Tis such a wondrous sight.

Fluffy clouds of swirling shapes
Soon stir imagination,
Sailing ships and castles ring
With witch's incantation.

Stallions race 'cross dusty plains
With long manes flowing free,
Knights of Old in armor gold,
Charge forth with chivalry.

Tall dragons snorting fire,
Fierce lions roar with pride,
Swans swimming on a glassy pond
In slow and graceful glide.

Mountains topped with ice caps,
Scrub palms on desert plains,
Oceans rolling to the skies,
Clouds dark with stormy rains.

Unicorns and elfin sprites,
Frolic on banks of stream,
Pixies prance and fairies dance,
In this my summer's dream.

In clouds of cotton candy,
I find flights of fantasy,
Taking me to far-off lands,
Where I would rather be.

~*~

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-12-2003 12:19 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-12 12:10 PM


wow! lemme go there too!
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-06-12 12:17 PM


Dixie, please do come along! We can gaze at the clouds and be carried to far-away lands.

Sometimes fantasy can make one's reality easier to swallow... When I am going through difficult times in my life, I become an avid cloud--and star--gazer. It takes me away from my problems--for awhile, anyway. Then I go and tackle them with renewed strength and vigor!  

Huggums,
Linda

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3 posted 2003-06-12 01:02 PM


such places as we can travel in our minds do often provide relief from the day to day.


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4 posted 2003-06-12 01:41 PM




Unicorns and elfin sprites,
Frolic on banks of stream,
Pixies prance and fairies dance,
In this my summer's dream

I love this I do..I do !!
hugs, Chris

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5 posted 2003-06-12 01:51 PM


EA,

You are dog gone amazing (dog gone is a phrase I use when I can't use the word I want...(get it) LOL)  You never miss, do you?  I was asked to bring some of my poems to a functions last night for an impromptu reading.  When I looked at what I wrote just a couple of months ago, I was so disappointed.  Gee, I remembered them being so much better than they actually were.  What does that mean?  May be I am growing?  And why I am bugging you with this?  Sorry.  The point is you never miss...perfection everytime.  I love it!

Patricia

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6 posted 2003-06-12 02:45 PM


i wanna go there,away from the dreary world of today
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-06-12 02:55 PM


Captain ~

Are you now spouting your own proverbs? LOL


Huggums,
EA

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-06-12 02:56 PM


Chris ~

---and I do believe that you do! Thanks for adding to my daily smile!

Love, Light, & Fantasy!
Linda

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-06-12 03:09 PM


Patricia ~

--"dog gone amazing" sounds dog gone good to me!

That's terrific that read your poetry at a function last evening! Don't worry about it not being as good as you had originally thought! That will always be the case. Writing is a growing process. That does, however, make question what I  am posting now! I may be cringing when I read my present works, years down the road--but then again, that could be a good thing--because, like you said,I'd be growing!

Take care sweetums!
EA

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10 posted 2003-06-12 03:11 PM


gyiel ~

Hop aboard! Heading for cloud nine! That's my favorite!  

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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11 posted 2003-06-12 03:55 PM


Wow.....this is wonderful
Your imagery is just crazy good.
You make me a better writer and more in love with poetry with every poem I read from you.
Great words =)
Joe  


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12 posted 2003-06-12 04:03 PM


Joe ~

That reply was so wonderful, I feel like framing it! Thank you so much!

~ May your creative light shine even more brightly with the passing of time...

Peace, Light, & the Love of Writing!
EA

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13 posted 2003-06-12 07:15 PM


Putting my fare in.  Buckling my seatbelt..

Let's go girl.  What a ride..

NewEnglandlazurlu
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14 posted 2003-06-12 08:17 PM


How much I enjoyed this tonight.
I so need a flight of fantasy and you have provided it. Thank you for this gift!

Woman with heartache
transforms to a ship that sails
a brilliant blue sea.

Hugs and Luvs Sis ....


Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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15 posted 2003-06-12 09:26 PM


"In clouds of cotton candy,
I find flights of fantasy,
Taking me to far-off lands,
Where I would rather be."


My favorite lines by far! I loved the imagry in this. Great job!

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2003-06-12 11:04 PM


devinechild ~

Enjoyed your enthusiastic reply! Thank you!

Warm hugs,
EA

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17 posted 2003-06-12 11:06 PM


Magnus ~

Hurry up and join me! I'll be waiting in 7th heaven for you!

Off we go into the wild blue yonder!

EA

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18 posted 2003-06-12 11:09 PM


Marti Dearest, and thank you for your gift! That lovely senryu choked me up! You know me so well.

I would love to watch clouds with you on a beautiful summer's day--and laugh, and giggle and talk!  

Thank you for such a sweet and loving reply!

Huggums

Linda

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19 posted 2003-06-13 01:06 AM


Earth Angel...I love the way you wrote this. Your imagery was outstanding and your rhyme scheme perfect. Will have to look at clouds differently from now on. ***Ivy Rose
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20 posted 2003-06-13 01:12 AM


In clouds of cotton candy,
I find flights of fantasy,
Taking me to far-off lands,
Where I would rather be.


Linda, when's the next flight leaving?
Gary and I are ready to go, too.
      

Hugs
Ethel


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21 posted 2003-06-14 07:09 AM


'Fluffy clouds of swirling shapes,soon stir the imagination,
sailing ships and castles ring with witches incantation'
Wonderful words, rhyming perfectly.

there is tolkien themes here..!

Thanks for the fantasy words.

goldenrose.

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22 posted 2003-06-14 07:21 AM



_____________________________________________
words of beautiful dreams and fantasys mix
   into my mind as i read your words
taking me towards the far-off plains
as i float by the dragons and things
  that one would only see in dreams
_____________________________________________

Thanks for the wonderful journey you took me on

RedStoneEB

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2003-06-14 10:16 AM


Ivy Rose ~

A reply such as yours, truly warms my heart!

~ May swirling clouds transport you to magical far-off places!

Have a wonderful day!
EA

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24 posted 2003-06-14 10:19 AM


Ethel ~

Next flight leaves at noon--heaven's time! You and Gary are most welcome!
Look forward to finally meeting our Passions-ate couple!

Don't forget your wings!
Huggums,
Linda

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25 posted 2003-06-14 10:20 AM


Goldenrose ~

'Twas my supreme pleasure, Dear Rose of Gold!

The sky's the limit!
EA

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26 posted 2003-06-14 10:23 AM


RedStone ~

--and thank you "for the wonderful journey you took me on"! That was very special--the melding of our thoughts!

May your imagination know no limitations...

Warm hugs,
EA

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27 posted 2003-06-14 05:23 PM




(smiles) I love staring up at the blue sky and looking at the marshamallow clouds too, yay! (kiss on cheek) I too love finding shapes and I love to dream and pretend I am up in the heavens and get to see all the beautiful things we dream yet to see everywhere in reality! (smiles) This is just gorgeous, sweet friend, your words always make flowers bloom and bluebirds trill happily we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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28 posted 2003-06-14 05:33 PM


just fabulous,,,,
Earth Angel
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29 posted 2003-06-14 05:43 PM


Noah ~

I am an incurable daydreamer as well! Flights of fantasy can be far more pleasant than reality can be at times!

~ May the clouds along your heavenly path in life, be white and fluffy!

Huggums,
Linda

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30 posted 2003-06-14 05:45 PM


QjQ ~

I do believe that that may be the first time that I have received a "fabulous" reply!

Thank you!

May clouds carry your troubles away!
EA

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31 posted 2003-06-14 06:11 PM


Hello Linda

Yet another simply stunning piece of writing.

This is for you.



Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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32 posted 2003-06-14 06:28 PM


Sue ~

You are an absolute doll for taking the time to find the perfect pictures to complement my poetry. Thank you, Dear One! You are so generous and thoughtful!

~ May your spirits soar to heights unknown...


Linda


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33 posted 2003-06-16 02:08 PM


I escape when I read your words sweet angel

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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34 posted 2003-06-16 02:13 PM


In clouds of cotton candy,
I find flights of fantasy,
Taking me to far-off lands,
Where I would rather be.



Sounds like a fantastic voyage. Mind if I tag along?  

Huggles ....

Earth Angel
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35 posted 2003-06-16 03:39 PM


Ceinwyn ~

Oh, that was so sweet of you to say!

Cloud gazing can be a pleasurable way to while the day and escape from some of the harsh realities of life...

Huggums,
EA

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36 posted 2003-06-16 03:41 PM


Marti ~

Wither I goeth, thy company would be most welcome!

Loves and hugs,
Linda

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37 posted 2008-02-06 05:45 PM


This is very Beautiful EA!

This is very lovely, I really Liked this fantasy

ARCTIC WIND

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