Open Poetry #27 |
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Flights of Fantasy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
~*~ Lying by the river's edge In clover pink and white, My eyes scan the skies above, 'Tis such a wondrous sight. Fluffy clouds of swirling shapes Soon stir imagination, Sailing ships and castles ring With witch's incantation. Stallions race 'cross dusty plains With long manes flowing free, Knights of Old in armor gold, Charge forth with chivalry. Tall dragons snorting fire, Fierce lions roar with pride, Swans swimming on a glassy pond In slow and graceful glide. Mountains topped with ice caps, Scrub palms on desert plains, Oceans rolling to the skies, Clouds dark with stormy rains. Unicorns and elfin sprites, Frolic on banks of stream, Pixies prance and fairies dance, In this my summer's dream. In clouds of cotton candy, I find flights of fantasy, Taking me to far-off lands, Where I would rather be. ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-12-2003 12:19 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! lemme go there too! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dixie, please do come along! We can gaze at the clouds and be carried to far-away lands. Sometimes fantasy can make one's reality easier to swallow... When I am going through difficult times in my life, I become an avid cloud--and star--gazer. It takes me away from my problems--for awhile, anyway. Then I go and tackle them with renewed strength and vigor! ![]() Huggums, Linda |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
such places as we can travel in our minds do often provide relief from the day to day. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Unicorns and elfin sprites, Frolic on banks of stream, Pixies prance and fairies dance, In this my summer's dream I love this I do..I do !! hugs, Chris ![]() |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
EA, You are dog gone amazing (dog gone is a phrase I use when I can't use the word I want...(get it) LOL) You never miss, do you? I was asked to bring some of my poems to a functions last night for an impromptu reading. When I looked at what I wrote just a couple of months ago, I was so disappointed. Gee, I remembered them being so much better than they actually were. What does that mean? May be I am growing? And why I am bugging you with this? Sorry. The point is you never miss...perfection everytime. I love it! Patricia |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
i wanna go there,away from the dreary world of today |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captain ~ Are you now spouting your own proverbs? LOL ![]() Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris ~ ---and I do believe that you do! Thanks for adding to my daily smile! ![]() Love, Light, & Fantasy! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patricia ~ --"dog gone amazing" sounds dog gone good to me! ![]() That's terrific that read your poetry at a function last evening! Don't worry about it not being as good as you had originally thought! That will always be the case. Writing is a growing process. That does, however, make question what I am posting now! I may be cringing when I read my present works, years down the road--but then again, that could be a good thing--because, like you said,I'd be growing! Take care sweetums! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
gyiel ~ Hop aboard! Heading for cloud nine! That's my favorite! ![]() Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
Wow.....this is wonderful Your imagery is just crazy good. You make me a better writer and more in love with poetry with every poem I read from you. Great words =) Joe |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Joe ~ That reply was so wonderful, I feel like framing it! Thank you so much! ![]() ~ May your creative light shine even more brightly with the passing of time... Peace, Light, & the Love of Writing! EA |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Putting my fare in. Buckling my seatbelt.. Let's go girl. What a ride.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
How much I enjoyed this tonight. I so need a flight of fantasy and you have provided it. Thank you for this gift! Woman with heartache transforms to a ship that sails a brilliant blue sea. Hugs and Luvs Sis .... Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
"In clouds of cotton candy, I find flights of fantasy, Taking me to far-off lands, Where I would rather be." My favorite lines by far! I loved the imagry in this. Great job! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
devinechild ~ Enjoyed your enthusiastic reply! Thank you! ![]() Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Magnus ~ Hurry up and join me! I'll be waiting in 7th heaven for you! ![]() Off we go into the wild blue yonder! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti Dearest, and thank you for your gift! That lovely senryu choked me up! You know me so well. I would love to watch clouds with you on a beautiful summer's day--and laugh, and giggle and talk! ![]() Thank you for such a sweet and loving reply! Huggums ![]() Linda |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Earth Angel...I love the way you wrote this. Your imagery was outstanding and your rhyme scheme perfect. Will have to look at clouds differently from now on. ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
In clouds of cotton candy, I find flights of fantasy, Taking me to far-off lands, Where I would rather be. Linda, when's the next flight leaving? Gary and I are ready to go, too. ![]() ![]() ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
'Fluffy clouds of swirling shapes,soon stir the imagination, sailing ships and castles ring with witches incantation' Wonderful words, rhyming perfectly. there is tolkien themes here..! Thanks for the fantasy words. goldenrose. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
_____________________________________________ words of beautiful dreams and fantasys mix into my mind as i read your words taking me towards the far-off plains as i float by the dragons and things that one would only see in dreams _____________________________________________ Thanks for the wonderful journey you took me on RedStoneEB my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ivy Rose ~ A reply such as yours, truly warms my heart! ![]() ~ May swirling clouds transport you to magical far-off places! Have a wonderful day! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ Next flight leaves at noon--heaven's time! ![]() Look forward to finally meeting our Passions-ate couple! ![]() Don't forget your wings! Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goldenrose ~ 'Twas my supreme pleasure, Dear Rose of Gold! ![]() The sky's the limit! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
RedStone ~ --and thank you "for the wonderful journey you took me on"! That was very special--the melding of our thoughts! ![]() May your imagination know no limitations... Warm hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) I love staring up at the blue sky and looking at the marshamallow clouds too, yay! (kiss on cheek) I too love finding shapes and I love to dream and pretend I am up in the heavens and get to see all the beautiful things we dream yet to see everywhere in reality! (smiles) This is just gorgeous, sweet friend, your words always make flowers bloom and bluebirds trill happily we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-14-2003 05:49 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
just fabulous,,,, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ I am an incurable daydreamer as well! Flights of fantasy can be far more pleasant than reality can be at times! ~ May the clouds along your heavenly path in life, be white and fluffy! ![]() Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
QjQ ~ I do believe that that may be the first time that I have received a "fabulous" reply! ![]() Thank you! May clouds carry your troubles away! EA |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Linda Yet another simply stunning piece of writing. This is for you. ![]() Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue ~ You are an absolute doll for taking the time to find the perfect pictures to complement my poetry. Thank you, Dear One! You are so generous and thoughtful! ![]() ~ May your spirits soar to heights unknown... ![]() Linda |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I escape when I read your words sweet angel ![]() If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
In clouds of cotton candy, I find flights of fantasy, Taking me to far-off lands, Where I would rather be. Sounds like a fantastic voyage. Mind if I tag along? ![]() Huggles .... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ceinwyn ~ Oh, that was so sweet of you to say! ![]() Cloud gazing can be a pleasurable way to while the day and escape from some of the harsh realities of life... Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ Wither I goeth, thy company would be most welcome! ![]() Loves and hugs, Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is very Beautiful EA! This is very lovely, I really Liked this fantasy ARCTIC WIND |
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