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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-23 04:44 AM

tears fall with rain

the ocean embraces
cries of lost love
with her welcoming heart

songs of farewell
wait for
a rising sun

as true love
sees its face again

glistening eternally
on the mirror of the sea

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

1 posted 2003-06-23 06:10 AM

Ah, yes! True love can be felt everywhere
to those who have it. Very creative write.
I enjoyed!

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-06-23 06:36 AM

fabulous write,, the goddest has taken quill n ink and sent another wonderful read to us...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-23 08:07 AM

just beauty

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

4 posted 2003-06-23 11:33 AM

there's something magical about a sunrise on the ocean... enjoyed

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-06-23 11:40 AM

Michele:

this is lovely
was just at the beach yesterday and
looking far far into the horizon . . .
I questioned all of it
xxoo

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-06-23 04:20 PM

Soft and lovely.
Thanks,
Eric

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-06-23 06:13 PM

A wonderful write, expressing the vast pain of loss of love.
Love, Margherita

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2003-06-23 06:16 PM

Very much enjoyed the portrait you have
painted so well. Thanx.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2003-06-30 05:27 PM

I like that....mirror of the sea...wish i thought of it.Nice write too by the way!

IntoTheFlames
Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

10 posted 2003-06-30 05:38 PM

Once again you have done a totally outstanding job! Great Work!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2003-06-30 06:25 PM

THANKS FOR READING
BBOY..SO NICE TO MEET AGAIN, IF ONLY ON THE BLUE.........

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

12 posted 2003-06-30 06:59 PM

it's like seeing a reflection on the wall...I love your poetry.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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