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Open Poetry #27

Glow (haiku)

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-22 10:40 PM

Watch the red orange glow
I enjoy the city lights
The sky is falling

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-06-22 10:42 PM

Excellent one...I love it!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2003-06-22 10:45 PM

interesting haiku and could be continued into a more descriptive poem...just an idea

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-06-22 10:49 PM

Great image. I really must try a haiku...first, I need to stop talking about it and pick up the pen, for goodness sake.

Very nice.

Patricia

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-23 09:18 AM

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

5 posted 2003-06-23 09:50 AM

Nothing to critique, here!
Terrific write - 5/7/5 telling
a complete story and painting
colors on the canvas!
Much enjoyed!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-08-10 11:58 PM

Loved the Scenery, Sounds cool

ARCTIC WIND

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