Open Poetry #27 |
When Silence Surrounds |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
~ By Sue ~ Sometimes it is hard To forget those special years When our love was new When silence surrounds My thoughts are right there with you Wishing you were here But then I do think Of all the things we went through Then my wish does change 6-22-03 |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
We all have those kind of thoughts when the night is long and quiet. Then presto! It is a new day and we are thinking more clearly - thank goodness! Good write Sue. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
I know what it is to miss what I wish had been. Then I go through a reality check. Nice writing, Sue! Shenachie |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes you always think why did I give you up. Then the reality check comes in and you remember why. So true. Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And with the morning comes the dawning of a new day!--and you are free and your own person and you have made a brand new life for yourself! Those painful moments will continue to come and go, but they'll come less frequently and be of shorter durations! Thank goodness! Huggums, Linda |
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SuperDave Junior Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 48Little House on the Hill |
This is a keeper Sue, simple and clear a statement from the heart. I would not change a word. David |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) And that is a very wise decision, dearest friend, I just wish for you to be happy and there is apparently no reason to looking back without feeling regret! (sigh) So...leave the rear view mirror dirty, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Reflective moments like this are good for us to remind us that we made the right decision....I love the way you have expressed it....Wonderful writing, Sue... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"But then I do think Of all the things we went through Then my wish does change" When it's good it's great, and when it's not it's horrible. I know exactly where this one is coming from sweet friend. Great write!! Tima C. Please visit my website: www.southerncountrywebdesign.com/~heart/ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I went through a struggle like this thinking it was the easy way out but it was the way back in...and I didn't want back in...James |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
A right decision and the sad feelings and thoughts will eventually be replaced by fond memories. There IS a fond memory here, there and way back when! Excellent write, from the heart! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one! Stay strong! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
To all of you! Thank you for reading and replying. Those reality checks are indeed good to have. They keep us out of trouble. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful Write Sue! ARCTIC WIND |
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