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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-06-22 06:32 PM


This balcony peered in the facets of imagination
These endless skies of deepest hue amaze by lights location
Full as lovers lips, pursed in kisses tender
Combining in a thorough meld of inconclusive gender

Color blue, a midnight sigh upon a sultry evening
Sparkled within blinks of winks, the stars uncoupled gleaning
Whispers pink of yearning flush the cheeking stillness
This balcony prepared and set to greet of dawning brilliance

And rise my heart to celebrate of what the mind will spy
And rise in spirits drifting to be close in moist reply
This balcony to decorate in blossom and white light
Awaited within midnight to enfold and hold me tight

Copyright Kkh 6/22/03



© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-06-22 06:38 PM


oh love, love for life, passion for all and everything, the air we breath, the lips we crave, the soul we touch, even when he is so far away...we can taste their scent a million miles away...and their soul live inside...what a beauty of a write, surely brought warm thoughts to my mind and heart.  
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-06-22 06:40 PM


very beautiful visions...
Color blue, a midnight sigh upon a sultry evening...I can see myself there...
*s
M

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-06-22 06:45 PM


And rise my heart to celebrate of what the mind will spy
And rise in spirits drifting to be close in moist reply
This balcony to decorate in blossom and white light
Awaited within midnight to enfold and hold me tight

sigh me a river would you~

TD~     


Magnus
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4 posted 2003-06-22 08:02 PM


You have painted a remarkable scene...To me
it is an evening just sitting, gazing into
a heaven of brilliance...of the stars and
all else that is there.  Quite a nice place
to be..

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
5 posted 2003-06-22 08:13 PM


This balcony to decorate in blossom and white light
Awaited within midnight to enfold and hold me tight


I loved this whole piece, but especially the ending. I felt as though I was enjoying the warm Caribbean breezes as I overlooked the dreamy, turquoise ocean.

Thank you for such wonderful, loving imagery.

Hugs ... Marti

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-06-22 08:27 PM


Thank you, Dear TD, for taking me there! I think I'll close my eyes now and envision the loveliness of the scene yet again...

Warm hugs,
EA

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-08-07 11:37 PM


Color blue, a midnight sigh upon a sultry evening
Sparkled within blinks of winks, the stars uncoupled gleaning
Whispers pink of yearning flush the cheeking stillness
This balcony prepared and set to greet of dawning brilliance......................."



Just lovely Descriptions TD!


ARCTIC WIND

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