Open Poetry #27 |
Grand Blue Nights |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This balcony peered in the facets of imagination These endless skies of deepest hue amaze by lights location Full as lovers lips, pursed in kisses tender Combining in a thorough meld of inconclusive gender Color blue, a midnight sigh upon a sultry evening Sparkled within blinks of winks, the stars uncoupled gleaning Whispers pink of yearning flush the cheeking stillness This balcony prepared and set to greet of dawning brilliance And rise my heart to celebrate of what the mind will spy And rise in spirits drifting to be close in moist reply This balcony to decorate in blossom and white light Awaited within midnight to enfold and hold me tight Copyright Kkh 6/22/03 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh love, love for life, passion for all and everything, the air we breath, the lips we crave, the soul we touch, even when he is so far away...we can taste their scent a million miles away...and their soul live inside...what a beauty of a write, surely brought warm thoughts to my mind and heart. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful visions... Color blue, a midnight sigh upon a sultry evening...I can see myself there... *s M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
And rise my heart to celebrate of what the mind will spy And rise in spirits drifting to be close in moist reply This balcony to decorate in blossom and white light Awaited within midnight to enfold and hold me tight sigh me a river would you~ TD~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have painted a remarkable scene...To me it is an evening just sitting, gazing into a heaven of brilliance...of the stars and all else that is there. Quite a nice place to be.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This balcony to decorate in blossom and white light Awaited within midnight to enfold and hold me tight I loved this whole piece, but especially the ending. I felt as though I was enjoying the warm Caribbean breezes as I overlooked the dreamy, turquoise ocean. Thank you for such wonderful, loving imagery. Hugs ... Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you, Dear TD, for taking me there! I think I'll close my eyes now and envision the loveliness of the scene yet again... Warm hugs, EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Color blue, a midnight sigh upon a sultry evening Sparkled within blinks of winks, the stars uncoupled gleaning Whispers pink of yearning flush the cheeking stillness This balcony prepared and set to greet of dawning brilliance......................." Just lovely Descriptions TD! ARCTIC WIND |
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