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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-05-01 07:23 PM

We are pulled by far
desires -

As tides rush the shore to
the madness of the
moon.

As birds dream of flight...before
they even taste the
air.

This is our connection.

We are joined in greater
passions.

Rising to the distant
pull of our
desires.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2003-05-01 07:25 PM

I feel the pull of magic in this wonderful poem...are we not all connected in such a way...I love this poem...it speaks to me..

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-05-01 07:34 PM

...BEAUTIFUL!!!...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-05-01 07:40 PM

Eric, this is absolutely breathtaking.
TD

davidmerriman
Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 123
Dallas, TX

4 posted 2003-05-01 07:55 PM

As birds dream of flight...before
they even taste the air

I really liked this line, the rest of the poem was alright.

keep writing creative lines like that one!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-05-01 10:32 PM

(smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, if you go the distance any connection can be made, it's all about suspension! (big hugggssssssss) This is lovely sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

poetSeaMaiden
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 107

6 posted 2003-05-02 08:21 AM

Well, absolutely breathtaking is an understatement! This is beautiful in SO many ways - I enjoy how much you pack into so few lines. WOW...

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden

edh
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 111

7 posted 2003-05-02 12:50 PM

Very nice. Reminds me of a song.

Well it's a marvelous night for a moondance.
A fantabulous night to make romance.
And all the nights magic seems to whisper and hush. And all the soft moonlight seems to shine. In your blush. Can I just have one more moon dance with you my love.
Can I just make some more romance with you.
My love.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-05-02 06:29 PM

Eric:

*chills* with this one

As birds dream of flight...before
they even taste the
air.

lovely - just amazing
xxoo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2003-05-04 03:37 PM

Oh I almost missed this passionate connection!
How extremely stirring.

pulled by far desires

Your words set me on fire ...

Remarkable, beautiful, haunting.
Love, Margherita

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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10 posted 2003-05-04 04:26 PM

Great use of parallelism -- tides rise, birds rise, passions....

Well done.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2003-05-05 10:55 PM

The pull of your passion is lovely~
as well as the connection you inspire.

Nice~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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12 posted 2003-05-06 03:57 AM

wonderful writing!

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