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| Open Poetry #26 |
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Shadow Plays |
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MysticDreamer Member
since 2003-04-21
Posts 131 |
Shadow Plays Lost inside the longings of nightfall Thinking about natures mysteries When moonlight shown through the windows Creating shadow plays on the wall A dance between the wind and trees Their whispered secrets that no one knows A sudden gust conspired new shapes In complete accord with the moon To form the artist and instument As wind chimes rang out their tune |
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davidmerriman Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 123Dallas, TX |
pretty good. i often find myself writing poems like this, and i enjoy them, but my oppinion wavers because i think there should be more description or more meaning to it, one way or the other. tis all good. keep writing! |
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