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The Futility of Likeness
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The Futility of Likeness |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
My soul, like a beggar feasts on the futility of likeness falling like rain singing like a bird crying like a baby hoping like an orphan loving like a parent cursing like demons Summed and totaled to be less than the pain that feels like dying for your touch. Rf |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like your likes, Robert... I even like the fact that you understand what has to be... Thank you, Sir... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Very Very nice feelings expresed!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ahhhh...the ache of longing...h |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It was your title that drew me in... Only to find every word was both intense and passionate. I like that in a poem! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
pretty neat.... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Love this! Hugs, Pat  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Summed and totaled to be less than the pain that feels like dying for your touch.' Great verse! And the title is perfect. Really like this Robert. Your style is among my favorites here. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amazing |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is, like, good...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I enjoyed this... Thank You! Richy |
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