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My Moonlight Love
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My Moonlight Love |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
This is a repost. For now, my Moonlight, until the right words come again to my pen. I know that they will soon, having read your words today. Speaking to you this way, without form and rhythm, I find that the words do not come as easily as they normally do. But, it is how I must speak to you now. I must speak to you as my self, as your own, as the poet of your heart. For in this guise, I can best tell you what is on my own heart. I love you. Not as the flowers need the rain, or as the ocean needs the shore. Not as the Winter needs the Spring, or as the night needs the day. I love you. I love you as you are. I love you as your heart sings with my own When candles burn against the wall, and the only sound is your dreaming breath. I love you as your eyes meet with my own When the only thing that matters is the way you are in my life. I love you as your hands slip softly into mine When our dancing makes the world stop and stare and wonder in delight. Our song is no longer quiet, a secret that is kept beneath. Rather, it is something that is seen every day in skies of life, When we rise at dawn, and spin at dusk. That is all that is needed, the sight of us. We make the world move and listen with our light and our words. Timeless, we are. Timeless, we shall be. So, rest now my Moonlight Love, Rest your head now so soft upon my Daylight shoulders, And sleep the sleep of lovers again. Dream the dreams of Romeos and Juliets, And feel the touches of fingers and feathers. Feel the thread of my love As it begins to wrap around your heart, Binding it to itself and to my heart. See me shining in your sky, And know that no matter how far, Our hearts are always in love. Peace is the only battle worth waging. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Post or repost Romeo...I am so glad I found this here. This reads as gentle as a lover's sigh. Very beautifully penned. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* a vision of true love....I love the way it came to life before my eyes...Stunning... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such splendor graces these hearts that share this epic romance. All light to your days and nights. TD |
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davidmerriman Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 123Dallas, TX |
I had mixed feelings with this one. Some of the verses I found cheesy and predictable, others were quite good. I would drop lines 6-11, they're not quite needed; maybe as an ending... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is a beautiful re-post for your Moonlight, sweet friend, fear not, your muse will come back to you, and don't afraid to be daring to reach new horizons, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Thank you all my friends. davidmerriman, thank you for your comments. Sometimes, though, love cannot help but be cheesy and predictable. Thank you again. Peace is the only battle worth waging. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Lovely! |
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